Sunday, February 20, 2011

FREE ISB ESSAY EDITING AND SAMPLE ESSAYS

Q1. What speech would you give to convince others about yor candidature for being elected to the post of  the President of the ISB student body?

Dear friends, today I stand before you, to convince you about the qualities that I possess needed to represent all of us and become President of the ISB student body.  As a good leader I am an optimist, result-oriented and co-operative person who has strong values and is an excellent team player.
A year back when I learnt of a charitable school for slum children suffering from the absence of volunteers, I decided to take a stand. I leveraged my position as a member of Social Service Committee of XXX and started a movement to help the school. With the support of my committee, the message spread like wild fire and many agreed to volunteer. When this movement started languishing in absence of conveyance facility, I wasn’t disheartened but kept faith in my abilities. I quoted the example of my own increased work productivity as a benefit of volunteering and convinced the XXX administration to provide free conveyance .The project got a jump start and within 6 months the number of volunteers tripled.
During my last three years at XXX, I have played other key leadership roles like the Treasurer of the XXX Toastmaster Club and the mentor for a team of Business Analysts. I plan to bring the same grit and undying spirit to the ISB student body. I will start a poetry club for the budding poets and will initiate more Area level activities in the Toastmaster Club at ISB. First hand knowledge of working with the tribals of AAAAA, a tribal hamlet near Hyderabad will help me start more self-empowerment activities like providing sewing training for the women at village adopted by the net-impact club. My previous experiences at job will assist me to organise more interactive sessions between the students and the industry experts .
4)Please provide additional information, if any, that will significantly affect the consideration of your application to the ISB. Please do not repeat information which has already been stated elsewhere in the application. You may use this to clarify any breaks in education/work, inform about any other item, which you think has not been covered elsewhere etc. (300 words max) 


I would like to mention few activities that I enjoy and that form an important part of my life.
So beautiful petals of charm,
intricately woven in a small bunch,
the little blue flower as we call ,
you awed me every now and then.

I remember passing by the garden every day,
how my eyes wouldn't stop admiring your beauty,
how my hands always reached out to get your little touch,
yes you were my favorite , the little blue-bell.
I am an ardent poet and I love to write poems on nature and emotions. I formed a poetry club in college to acknowledge and encourage budding poets .The poetry club was a success and gave a good platform to the poets  to display their otherwise hidden potential. A year back I started showcasing my poems in my blog www.sermonsofmotherhen.blogspot.com.
I enjoy participating in and initiating social awareness programs. As a member of social service committee of XXX, I started a campaign to save energy. On 8th May 2008, all the employees at XXX were  requested to switch off the lights  from 6pm to 7 pm. I designed posters for the event which were highly appreciated by the mentor of Social Service Committee. To encourage employees at XXX to join this campaign more enthusiastically, a contest was also organized inviting the best ideas to utilize the 1 hour without electricity. The drive got whole-hearted support and was a huge accomplishment.
I also have interest in tableaus and mono-acting .They have always uplifted me and given me utter satisfaction of being able to convey my thoughts without words instead just by action or just by a posture as in a tableau.

FREE HEC ESSAY EDITING AND SAMPLE ADMISSION ESSAYS


Q1. Why are you applying to the HEC MBA Program now? What is the professional objective that will guide your career choice after your MBA, and how will the HEC MBA contribute to the achievement of this objective? (500 words)

I joined XXX, a $17.1 billion company, as an engineering graduate in 2005. The insatiable thirst to learn and apply new things catapulted me to develop a new billing method for the insurance product which helped XXX  win multi-million dollar deals. My efforts were rewarded in form of a promotion and an opportunity to visit USA to lead and train a team of 20 people.
Working in IT sector, I became aware of interdependency of IT and Business and decided to go beyond the realm of developing an IT product to leveraging my technical acumen in making strategic utilization of IT in Business. Eventually I wanted to take up roles of greater responsibility in business domain and ascend the value chain.
To set a stage for this transition, I obtained various certifications and got thorough understanding of the insurance domain I was working in. I further  took up the role of a business analyst and analyzed business requirements, planned time-lines and negotiated with clients. I also spearheaded the planning of  Interface for YYYY services that increased their productivity by 19%.
As work became more demanding, the urge to overcome the hardships and the desire to fast-track my career transition from technical to business domain became stronger and aroused the need of a platform to obtain strong theoretical knowledge of business and strategy. Thus this made now the best time to pursue an MBA and benefit from its enhanced knowledge and skill refinement.
After completing an MBA from HEC, I aspire to leverage the insights obtained from strong course fundamentals to take up a role of consultant in IT field and join a renowned consulting company like Deloitte or Accenture. My previous experience would provide necessary skills to bridge the  gap between Business and Technology. Working along with erudite peer groups in world class organizations, I would learn the dynamics of ever changing international market and the business needs from bottom up approach.

Q 2. What do you consider your most significant life achievement? (250 words)

My most significant life achievement was that of transforming an impoverished tribal hamlet into a village on the road to prosperity.
In 2007, I was apprised of dismal condition of tribal hamlet AAAAA. The inhabitants were poor with no means of earning their livelihood and were surviving on funds given by an NGO. With illiteracy and inadequate medical facility, situation at village was grim and needed immediate attention.
I decided to  leverage my experience with Social Service Committee and sent out e-mails to XXX employees asking for help in terms of monetary donation or voluntary support. The message spread like a wild fire with large number of employees turning up as volunteers and a record collection of funds giving the movement, the much needed boost.
Using these funds, a school was built  and teachers were appointed to teach both children and adults. Volunteers taught locals about health and hygiene and ways to avoid the spread of diseases. Village adults were also taught about stitching, masonry and handicrafts.
These days it gives me immense satisfaction to see the progress made by AAAAAA. The village school is abounding with students, villagers can now earn their living by doing masonry job, selling stitched dresses and handicrafts. The health and hygiene of the villagers has also improved.
Further XXX adopted this hamlet and ascertained a fixed amount of annual funding to continue the developmental programs. It was a great achievement which bolstered my spirits to carry on many more activities for the underprivileged.

Q 3. Leadership and ethics are inevitably intertwined in the business world. Describe a
situation in which you have dealt with these issues and how they have influenced you.
(250 words)

In early 2008, I lead a team in developing a new interface for a fixed time project which challenged both my values and leadership skills. The success was important for the huge amount of revenue project could generate.
During the last week of project, an error was discovered. Situation was crucial as the deadline of the project was too close. It became a huge predicament for a choice had to be made between either notifying it to the client and facing a possible cancellation of the contract or instead delivering an error prone interface to the customer and not risking our careers.

As the team leader, final decision rested with me. I was undeterred in pursuing my duty of apprising the client of the discrepancy. But as my decision had the potential to affect career prospects of other team members also, it became a tough choice.
As I pondered, I realized that the guilt of achieving success keeping virtues on stake was too overwhelming than the happiness gained from a flourishing career. I convinced my team to maintain integrity citing the inevitability of a lie getting uncovered. I further motivated the team to tread this path by being optimistic.
I went ahead and conveyed the issues to the client. Client appreciated our commitment and extended the deadline. It was a great learning experience. It bolstered my resolve to live up to my values of integrity and honesty. It gave me a good platform to refine my team and leadership skills.

Q 4. Imagine a life entirely different from the one you now lead, what would it be? (250 words)

A life entirely different from the one that I lead now would be the life of a full-time poet. I would be pursuing my passion of immersing myself in quality writing and pouring out my emotions to build melodious verses of poetry.
I would go beyond the role of just adorning my blog with my poems to writing poetry books for young and old alike. This would liberate my thoughts and allow them to touch many more lives than I could have imagined.
I would further take up the responsibility of enlightening young minds and giving wings to their artistic side. In order to achieve this, I would leverage the experience gained while setting up a poetry club at college, which eventually became a college funded body, to start a poetry school for young children. This school would act as a platform to teach students about how to write poems, admire beauty of nature, become more expressive, improve vocabulary and in the process grow holistically. Thus this initiative would not only invigorate the emotional side of young kids but also assist them in becoming  thoughtful citizens.
I would also work on making academics at schools more interesting by converting the dull and dreaded subjects into lyrical and artistic forms such that learning becomes an enjoyable experience for children. Thus I would start a movement of Alternative Learning and in the process of taking these initiatives, I would receive ultimate satisfaction.

Q 5 What figure do you most admire and why? You may choose from any field (arts, literature, politics,business, etc).

The person whom I admire the most is Mrs. Indira Gandhi, the first female Prime Minister of India. She was a resolute and a determined lady. An epitome of confidence who rose to become  a major power in the Indian political arena which was earlier dominated by men. She thus  played a major role in setting  a stage for the women of a newly freed India to aspire and achieve positions of power and responsibility .
 She personified a true leader and had amazing foresight. During her tenure as the Prime-Minister of India, special agricultural innovation programs and extra government support activities were launched that finally transformed India's chronic food shortages into surplus production of wheat, rice, cotton and milk. The country that used to rely on food aid, became a food exporter. She utilized her  good negotiation skills and handled war situation and situations of riots and instability with utmost sincerity. Her fearless attitude made her an icon for generations of women to come.
It is because of her contribution and far-reaching effects to the country and its people that today the importance of women has been re-kindled in different strata of Indian society. People are recognizing the equality of men and  women and women like me are getting an opportunity to pursue a career of their choice like applying to an MBA School and realizing their dreams.
Thus I aspire to inculcate in myself, similar qualities of sincerity, confidence and fearlessness and become an example for other women.